This is the final inked page (1 of 2) for Gray Haven’s GATHERING DARK antholody I am doing with Writer Tauriq Moosa, and Letterer David Paul.  I made a change in panel 4 to hide the vanishing point, and also, I made a total change to the protagonist’s hand, face and head for the last panel, I think it looks much better- overall this page turned out pretty well.  I also had fun with the minimal lines only background in page 7, I look forward to using that technique more in the future.