This is a sample sequential page I did for Freelance Author Don Smith Jr. – I thought it turned out to be a pretty cool page- Don’s script is after the pencilled page- enjoy!
Sample 1 page—Zombie & Girl
PANEL 1:
WE SEE A WOMAN RUNNING. SHE HAS LONG HAIR AND SHE IS A T-SHIRT AND SKIRT. SHE HAS A TERRIFIED LOOK ON HER FACE. WE SEE SHADOWS ON THE GROUND.
GIRL 1: Keep away!
SFX: Uhhhhhhh! Uhhhhhhhh!
PANEL 2:
WE SEE A ZOMBIE. HE IS REACHING OUT. HIS FACE IS DECADE. HIS RIGHT ARM IS STRETCHED AND WE SEE BOTH FLESH AND SHIRT SLEEVE HANGING OFF. HIS LEFT ARM IS IN A CLAW LIKE POSE.
ZOMBIE 1: Uhhhh!
GIRL OFF PANEL 2: Noo!
PANEL 3:
WE SEE AN OVER THE SHOULDER SHOT OF THE GIRL AGAINST A BRICK WALL. SHE IS FRIGHTENED AND WE SEE THE BACK OF THE ZOMBIE’S HEAD.
GIRL 1: Please! Stop!
ZOMBIE 2: AAAAAHHHHH!
PANEL 4:
WE SEE THE GIRL ON THE RIGHT SIDE OF THE PANEL WITH HER HANDS UP TO HER FACE. THE ZOMBIE IS STRETCHED AND ABOUT TO BITE HER.
GIRL 1: HELP ME!
ZOMBIE 2: AAAHHHH-UUUHHHHHH!
MAN OFF PANEL 1: Get away from her!
Don E. Smith Jr. -Author
